cerita detektif baru???

hum hum.. blognya diisi lagi,,hehehe.. enak juga ternyata, meski ga rutin..

kali ini ceritanya tentang cerita detektif karangan Ayodya!!
*jreng jreng jreng*

awalnya, tadi guru bahasa inggris tiba2 ngebagiin selebaran kertas, isinya suruh bikin semacem kerangka karangan.. jadi ceritanya kita itu inspektur yang sedang mengusut kasus pembunuhan. nah kasus pembunuhan itu diselesaikan sama Sherlock Holmes, dan kita harus bikin laporan kepolisian.
isinya tuh ada:
1. Name of Case
2. Name of Victim
3. Description of Crime, Including Details of Times, Places and Names of People Involved
4. Details of Clues
5. Motive
6. Research Undertaken
7. A Summary on How The Crime Was Solved
8. Actions Taken To Apprehend The Criminals
9. Any Furthur Information

aku dan Kansha *temen yg duduknya di sebelah* langsung semangat, karna kebetulan dua2nya suka nulis.
kita langsung brainstorming nyari2 ide..
hasilnya...

cerita Ayodya *campur2 bahasa aja ya*

1. Name of case: Elegy of Massacre
*mengutip judul lagu instrumental gitu*

2. Name of victim : XI ipa 2 Gonzaga High School class of 2007 *angkatan 18*

3. Time : Friday, March 10, 2006
Place : XI ipa 2 classroom at Gonzaga High School
People involved : English teacher, Mr. Him; principal Mr. Heru; chemistry teacher, Mr. Tri
Description of crime : a gas bomb blew up in XI ipa 2 classroom in the middle of Mr. Him's english period while Mr. Him was out of class. every student was killed. it happened three days after a XI ipa 2 student, Yuddy, dissapeared. suspects include:
- Yuddy, currently missing. motive: tired of having his classmates copying his notes and homework all the time *abis dia pinter sihhhh*
- english teacher, Mr. Him. motive: XI ipa 2 students never payed attention to his class
- principal, Mr. Heru. motive: unclear
- terrorist. motive: well, terrorizing the community
- chemistry teacher, Mr. Tri. motive: unclear, but knows how to make a gas bomb like the one that blew up XI ipa 2

4. Details of clues : a spare detonater found in the teacher's lounge

5. Motive : the criminal killed Yuddy by jealousy of his intellegence. the rest of the class was killed to cover up the murder of Yuddy

6. Research undertaken : reconstruction of the bomb; fingerprints on spare detonator was processed

7. A summary on how the crime was solved : the criminal was revealed after a series of forensic investigations. however, the criminal denied his involvement due to lack of evidence. later on, he confessed his crime. it turned out that for a period of time, the criminal felt like he was haunted by XI ipa 2 students. he constantly heard them in his sleep, and he experienced many unexplainable paranormal activity whenever he was alone.

8. Actions taken to apprehend the criminals : after his confession, the criminal was arrested. he was sentenced to death penalty.

9. Any furthur information : in turned out that for a period of time, the criminal felt like he was haunted by XI ipa 2 students. he constantly heard them in his sleep, and he experienced many unexplainable paranormal activity whenever he was alone. these "hauntings" made the criminal feel guilty which eventually lead him to his confession


hohoho.. bagaimana cerita saya??

kalo ceritanya Kansha itu judulnya Triumph of Death. ceritanya ada pembunuh yang korbannya cewek2 yang merayakan ultah yang ke-17 pada tanggal 29 februari. jadi si pembunuh melakukan pembunuhannya setiap 4 taun sekali, tepat jam 12 malam. sebelum ngebunuh, semua korbannya diperkosa.

motif si pembunuh itu karna dia dulu punya anak perempuan yang dibunuh & diperkosa pas ulang taunnya yang ke-17 pas tanggal 29 februari.

kenapa judulnya Triumph of Death?
karna, pembunuh ini berhasil lolos sampe 20 taun, kan dia cuma ngebunuh 4 taun skali. korbannya juga "baru" 5. kalo di amrik *kalo ga salah* kasus yang lebih dari 20 taun itu ga bisa lagi dibawa ke pengadilan.. gitu...
*itu ide sayaa.. hehehehe*

setelah saling nulis dan bertukar ide dengan semangat, kesimpulannya Kansha bilang,
"kita ini cewek2 yang berpikiran sadis yaa.."

begitulah..
hehehe...

sebenernya cerita itu bisa dikembangin lagi,,tapi ya tugasnya cuma segitu..


adakah yang berniat mengembangkan??
*ah... cerita ga mutu aja.. hehehe*